Am 29.03.2017 um 20:58 schrieb tolle...@dltolleson.com:
Thanks for letting me know.

I would point out, [...]

I'm confused. Is this just a further comment on the sentence in question? Or do you want to suggest a further change? If the later one, then I've not understood what you want to express.

Maybe t's because I'm not a native speaker. ;-)

Thanks

Marcus



On Wed, Mar 29, 2017 at 12:55 PM,
​> wrote:

    Am 29.03.2017 um 16:24 schrieb tolle...@dltolleson.com
    <mailto:tolle...@dltolleson.com>:

        Just wanted to bring your attention an error on the OpenOffice
        web site.

        The error is on this page...
        https://openoffice.apache.org/get-involved.html
        <https://openoffice.apache.org/get-involved.html>

        The error is under the heading, "A multidisciplinary open source
        project"
        and is the second item in the list of people that your
        organization is
        looking for.

        The text at issue now reads...
        • Write or existing documentation, also with technical topics

        I would suggest using one of the following...

        • Write on existing documentation and technical topics
        Or
        • Rewrite existing documentation and technical topics

        Or my personal favorite...
        • Improve existing documentation and technical topics

        You guys have a great product and I hope this helps in a small way,


    thanks for your hint. To keep the change minimal I've changed it in
    the following way:

    "Write new or improve existing documentation, also with technical
    topics"

    Marcus


---------------------------------------------------------------------
To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@openoffice.apache.org
For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@openoffice.apache.org

Reply via email to