Gentle persons:

I hadn't intended to review the man pages but several recent experiences 
convinced me I should.

This message covers editorial issues I found reviewing on 
http://www.linuxcnc.org/docs/2.5/ concerning the (English) "Commands and 
userspace components" listed in index.html.

I will break with my previous practice and list only the pages for which 
I have comments.

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comp.1 (man/man1/comp.1.html)

In "SEE ALSO" there are several references that need to be updated.

"Comp: A tool for creating HAL components in the emc2 documentation" 
probably refers to what is now known as the "COMP HAL Component 
Generator" in the Integrator Manual.

Similarly, "Creating Userspace Python Components with the 'hal' module" 
probably refers to what is now known as the "Creating Userspace Python 
Components" in the HAL Manual. There seems to be a spurious new-line 
preceding the line containing this reference.

---
gladevcp.1 (man/man1/gladevcp.1.html)

in "SEE ALSO" the reference "GladeVCP in the emc2 documentation..." 
probably refers what is now known as the "Glade Virtual Control Panel" 
in the Integrator Manual.

---
gs2.1 (man/man1/gs2.1.html)

In "USAGE" the reference "See the EMC2 Integrators Manual..." probably 
refers to what is now known as the "GS2 Driver" in the Integrator Manual.

---
pyvcp.1 (man/man1/pyvcp.1.html)

In "SEE ALSO" the reference "Virtual Control Panels in the emc2 
documentation..." probably refers to what is now known as the "Python 
Virtual Control Panel" in the Integrator Manual.

---
shuttlexpress.1 (man/man1/shuttlexpress.1.html)

I don't have a comment about this man page but rather about the rest of 
the EMC2 documentation. I couldn't find any information about the 
ShuttleXpress or this driver in the Integrator Manual. In the HAL 
Manual, I found only the "shuttlexpress" entry in "HAL Components/1. 
Commands and Userspace Components", which doesn't link to anything.

---

That's it for Commands and userspace components.


Regards,
Kent


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