On Wed, 2006-09-06 at 00:40 +0200, Claus Schwarm wrote: 
> Hi, 
> thanks for the text and especially for the images. I tried to re-write
> it a little bit to make the text a little bit less demanding.

> My first try is available here:
> http://live.gnome.org/TwoPointFifteen/ReleaseNotes/TwoSixteenPerformance
> I probably over-simplyfied too much. Please have a look and let me know
> where it happened. That would be a real help.

No. I think you have done a wonderful job - the text looks more like
human-speak and less geekish. And, it does adequately represent what I
wanted to convey.


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