On Wed, Nov 30, 2016 at 5:58 PM, John <sesso...@earthlink.net> wrote: > On 11/30/2016 4:02 PM, Bruce Walker wrote: >> >> http://portfolio.brucemwalker.com/index/I0000pGx46uauZi0 >> >> 645z, dfa645 90mm/2.8, f/4.5, 1/100th sec, 800 ISO. >> >> Key light: 5 foot stripbox, camera-left. Backlight: window light. >> >> Comments welcome. >> > > Doesn't quite do it for me. The wrinkles on the right side of the dress > spoil it. > > If the zipper had been all the way down, I think you'd have had a smooth > curve from the shoulders on both sides of the dress. Anyway, I would > find a smooth curve on both sides more appealing. > > The sweep from the left shoulder down to that loop in the zipper carries > my eye down to that bit of dark curtain intruding > along the right hand edge of the image. > > It's like hitting an unexpected speed bump that jerks the steering wheel > out of your hand - only for the eye.
Fair points, John. Thank you! -- -bmw -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
