On Wed, 2006-09-06 at 00:40 +0200, Claus Schwarm wrote: > Hi, > > thanks for the text and especially for the images. I tried to re-write > it a little bit to make the text a little bit less demanding.
> My first try is available here: > > http://live.gnome.org/TwoPointFifteen/ReleaseNotes/TwoSixteenPerformance > > I probably over-simplyfied too much. Please have a look and let me know > where it happened. That would be a real help. No. I think you have done a wonderful job - the text looks more like human-speak and less geekish. And, it does adequately represent what I wanted to convey. Thanks, Harish -- marketing-list mailing list marketing-list@gnome.org http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list
