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Mon, 27 Aug 2007 16:41:14 -0700
Author: philbull Date: Tue Aug 28 00:41:11 2007 New Revision: 4299 Modified: trunk/ubuntu/basic-commands/C/basic-commands.xml
Log:
Corrections to tense (patch from David Delony), added statuses to sections
Modified: trunk/ubuntu/basic-commands/C/basic-commands.xml
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--- trunk/ubuntu/basic-commands/C/basic-commands.xml (original)
+++ trunk/ubuntu/basic-commands/C/basic-commands.xml Tue Aug 28 00:41:11 2007
@@ -90,14 +90,14 @@
</para>
</sect1>
- <sect1 id="files-directories-commands">
+ <sect1 id="files-directories-commands" status="review">
<title>File and Directory Commands</title>
- <sect2 id="cd">
+ <sect2 id="cd" status="review">
<title>cd</title>
<para>
- The <command>cd</command> command will
- allow you to change directories. When you open a
+ The <command>cd</command> command
+ changes directories. When you open a
terminal you will be in your home directory. To move
around the file system you will use
<command>cd</command>. Examples:
@@ -147,14 +147,14 @@
</itemizedlist>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="pwd">
+ <sect2 id="pwd" status="review">
<title>pwd</title>
<para>
<command>pwd</command>: The
- <command>pwd</command> command will allow
- you to know in which directory you're located
- (<acronym>pwd</acronym> stands for "print working
- directory"). For example, typing
+ <command>pwd</command> command will show
+ you which directory you're located in
+ (<acronym>pwd</acronym> stands for <quote>print working
+ directory</quote>). For example, typing
<screen>pwd</screen> in the <filename
class="directory">Desktop</filename>
directory, will show
<computeroutput>~/Desktop</computeroutput>.
@@ -167,10 +167,10 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="ls">
+ <sect2 id="ls" status="review">
<title>ls</title>
<para>
- The <command>ls</command> command will show
+ The <command>ls</command> command shows
you the files in your current directory. Used with
certain options, you can see sizes of files, when files
where made, and permissions of files. For example, typing
@@ -179,10 +179,10 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="cp">
+ <sect2 id="cp" status="review">
<title>cp</title>
<para>
- The <command>cp</command> command will make a
+ The <command>cp</command> command makes a
copy of a file for you. For example, type:
<screen>cp file foo</screen> to make
a exact copy of <filename>file</filename> and name it
<filename>foo</filename>, but the file
@@ -190,10 +190,10 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="mv">
+ <sect2 id="mv" status="review">
<title>mv</title>
<para>
- The <command>mv</command> command will move a
+ The <command>mv</command> command moves a
file to a different location or will rename a file.
Examples are as follows:
<screen>mv file foo</screen>
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="rm">
+ <sect2 id="rm" status="review">
<title>rm</title>
<para>
Use the <command>rm</command> command
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="mkdir">
+ <sect2 id="mkdir" status="review">
<title>mkdir</title>
<para>
The <command>mkdir</command> command will
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@
<sect1 id="sys-info-commands" status="complete">
<title>System Information Commands</title>
- <sect2 id="df">
+ <sect2 id="df" status="review">
<title>df</title>
<para>
The <command>df</command> command displays
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="free">
+ <sect2 id="free" status="review">
<title>free</title>
<para>
The <command>free</command> command displays
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="top">
+ <sect2 id="top" status="review">
<title>top</title>
<para>
The <command>top</command> command displays
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="uname">
+ <sect2 id="uname" status="review">
<title>uname</title>
<para>
The <command>uname</command> command with the
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="lsb_release">
+ <sect2 id="lsb_release" status="review">
<title>lsb_release</title>
<para>
The <emphasis role='strong'>lsb_release</emphasis> command
@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="ifconfig">
+ <sect2 id="ifconfig" status="review">
<title>ifconfig</title>
<para>
The <command>ifconfig</command> command reports on
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@
</sect2>
</sect1>
- <sect1 id="elevated-privileges">
+ <sect1 id="elevated-privileges" status="review">
<title>Executing Commands with Elevated Privileges</title>
<para>
The following commands will need to be
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@
for information on using <command>sudo</command>.
</para>
- <sect2 id="add-group">
+ <sect2 id="add-group" status="review">
<title>Adding a New Group</title>
<para>
The <command>addgroup</command> command is used to create a
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="add-user">
+ <sect2 id="add-user" status="review">
<title>Adding A New User</title>
<para>
The <command>adduser</command> is used to create new users on
@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@
</sect2>
</sect1>
- <sect1 id="options">
+ <sect1 id="options" status="review">
<title>Options</title>
<para>The default behavior for a command may usually be
modified by adding a
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@
</para>
</sect1>
- <sect1>
+ <sect1 id="man-help" status="review">
<title>"Man" and getting help</title>
<para>
<emphasis role='strong'>
@@ -428,7 +428,7 @@
introduction to info pages.
</para>
- <sect2 id="searching-ma">
+ <sect2 id="searching-ma" status="review">
<title>Searching for man files</title>
<para>
If you aren't sure which command or application you
@@ -467,10 +467,10 @@
</sect2>
</sect1>
- <sect1 id="other-things">
+ <sect1 id="other-things" status="review">
<title>Other Useful Things</title>
- <sect2 id="pasting">
+ <sect2 id="pasting" status="review">
<title>Pasting in commands</title>
<para>
Often, you will be referred to instructions that
@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@
</para>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="save-typing">
+ <sect2 id="save-typing" status="review">
<title>Save on typing</title>
<informaltable>
<tgroup cols='3'>
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@
</informaltable>
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="change-text">
+ <sect2 id="change-text" status="review">
<title>Change the text</title>
<para>
The mouse won't work. Use the <keycap>Left/Right arrow</keycap> keys to
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