Try a little editing. >From this: > >> "The probable cause, my mind being inflicted then > >> becomes stimulated not only by the plot but also, > >> intrigued by the method in which the producer > >> choses to present the plot of the film to the > >> viewer." > >>
to this: > >> "The probable cause: my mind, being inflicted, > >> then becomes stimulated not only by the plot but > >> also intrigued by the method in which the > >> producer choses to present the plot of the film > >> to the viewer." > >> My version: Put cd into the cd player, press the 'Play' button, and let people express themselves. :) Dave __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? >From homework help to love advice, Yahoo! Experts has your answer. http://experts.yahoo.com/
