Dear Pascal, Thanks for the new draft version.
Your update looks good to me! Cheers, Carles > Dear Carles: > > I pushed an 06 that passes the doc to xml2rfc v3, and moves the ref to the > LWIG implementation to informational. > Please note that the main reason of the text about it is to indicate that > it is non-compatible with this draft. > For that reason it was actually strange to make it a normative reference, > many thanks for spotting it.. > > All the best; > > Pascal > > -----Original Message----- > From: Carles Gomez Montenegro <[email protected]> > Sent: dimanche 20 octobre 2019 17:15 > To: Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected] > Subject: Fragment recovery, shepherd writeup: one minor point > > Hello Pascal, > > While preparing my shepherd write-up for the 6lo fragment recovery draft, > I noticed one minor detail that I would like to bring to your attention. > > In -05, draft-ietf-lwig-6lowpan-virtual-reassembly was added as a > reference. I think it is a bit odd that this document is mentioned for the > first time only at the end of the Security considerations section (note > that this reference is in fact a normative reference). > > My proposal is updating the second paragraph of Section 1, and the last > paragraph of Section 2.4, so that > draft-ietf-lwig-6lowpan-virtual-reassembly is also introduced there. > > For example, for Section 2.4, it could be something along the lines of: > > CURRENT: > "LLN Minimal Fragment Forwarding" [I-D.ietf-6lo-minimal-fragment] > introduces the concept of a Virtual Reassembly Buffer (VRB) and an > associated technique to forward fragments as they come, using the > datagram_tag as a label in a fashion similar to MPLS. This > specification reuses that technique with slightly modified controls. > > NEW: > "LLN Minimal Fragment Forwarding" [I-D.ietf-6lo-minimal-fragment] > introduces the concept of a Virtual Reassembly Buffer (VRB) and an > associated technique to forward fragments as they come, using the > datagram_tag as a label in a fashion similar to MPLS. The technique is > described in [I-D.ietf-lwig-6lowpan-virtual-reassembly]. This > specification reuses that technique with slightly modified controls. > > .... and something similar might work also for Section 1. > > What do you think? > > Thanks, > > Carles (as the document shepherd) > > _______________________________________________ > 6lo mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lo > _______________________________________________ 6lo mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lo
