Robert
Robert Cragie (Pacific Gas & Electric) Gridmerge Ltd. 89 Greenfield Crescent, Wakefield, WF4 4WA, UK +44 1924 910888 +1 415 513 0064 http://www.gridmerge.com <http://www.gridmerge.com/> On 24/09/2010 8:27 PM, Behcet Sarikaya wrote:
Hi Geoff, I read the document, I think it is in good shape and can be moved. I listed the nits I found below. Regards, Behcet Typos: the duplicate address detection mechanism Specified in Section 8.2 s/S/s The re-registration of a address can be combined with Neighbor Unreachability Detection s/a/an in which case it has a different Length. s/L/l Neighbor Solicitations from hosts as specified above in section Section 6. s/section/ the Neighbor Cache entry for the host as specified in section Section 6 s/section/ Additional protocol constants are defined in Section Section 4. s/Section/ The use of 6LoWPAN and LoWPAN, sometimes in the same sentence is confusing. ----- Original Message ----From: Geoff Mulligan<[email protected]> To: 6lowpan<[email protected]> Sent: Thu, September 23, 2010 6:01:15 PM Subject: [6lowpan] Working Group Last call for draft-ietf-6lowpan-nd-13 We have been reviewing 6lowpan Neighbor Discovery for quite some time and have feedback on the list and from implementors. We will now start Working Group Last Call on: http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6lowpan-nd-13 The document is intended to be submitted by this Working Group to the IESG for publication as a Standards-Track Document. This is a two-week Working-Group Last-Call, ending on Friday, October 8, 2010 at 2359 UTC. Please review the changes to the document carefully, and send your comments to the 6lowpan list. Thanks, geoff _______________________________________________ 6lowpan mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan_______________________________________________ 6lowpan mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan
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