Hi All,

I support the new version of the abstract and introduction of the minimal draft.

Anand

On Monday 04 January 2016 11:17 PM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) wrote:
Dear all:

With my best wishes for a great year 2016, please find a reminder that we have 
a consensus (last) call running on the abstract and introduction of the minimal 
draft.
In order to cope with the Year-End break, the call continues till next Friday. 
So far, all I've been seeing is consensus with the latest change that Ralph 
proposed.
Where we are at now is as below:

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Abstract

BEFORE

This document describes the minimal set of rules to operate an IEEE
802.15.4 Timeslotted Channel Hopping (TSCH) network.  This minimal
mode of operation can be used during network bootstrap, as a fall-
back mode of operation when no dynamic scheduling solution is
available or functioning, or during early interoperability testing
and development.

  ---------------
AFTER

This document describes a minimal mode of operation for a 6TiSCH
Network, to provide IPv6 connectivity over a Non-Broadcast
Multi-Access (NBMA) mesh that is formed of IEEE 802.15.4 Timeslotted
Channel Hopping (TSCH) links.
This minimal mode uses a collection of protocols including the 6LoWPAN
framework and RPL to enable interoperable IPv6 connectivity over
IEEE 802.15.4 TSCH with minimal network configuration and infrastructure.


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Intro update:



BEFORE


--------------

1.  Requirements Language

    The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
    "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this
    document are to be interpreted as described in RFC 2119 [RFC2119].

2.  Introduction

    The nodes in a IEEE 802.15.4 TSCH network follow a communication
    schedule.  The entity (centralized or decentralized) responsible for
    building and maintaining that schedule has precise control over the
    trade-off between the network's latency, bandwidth, reliability and
    power consumption.  During early interoperability testing and
    development, however, simplicity is more important than efficiency.
    One goal of this document is to define the simplest set of rules for
    building a TSCH-compliant network, at the necessary price of lesser
    efficiency.  Yet, this minimal mode of operation MAY also be used
    during network bootstrap before any schedule is installed into the
    network so nodes can self-organize and the management and
    configuration information be distributed.  In addition, the minimal
    configuration MAY be used as a fall-back mode of operation, ensuring
    connectivity of nodes in case that dynamic scheduling mechanisms fail
    or are not available.  The IEEE 802.15.4 specification provides a
    mechanism whereby the details of slotframe length, timeslot timing,
    and channel hopping pattern are communicated when a node time
    synchronizes to the network [IEEE802154].  This document describes
    specific settings for these parameters.


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AFTER

--------------


1.  Introduction

    A 6TiSCH Network provides IPv6 connectivity over a Non-Broadcast
    Multi-Access (NBMA) mesh that is formed of IEEE 802.15.4
    Timeslotted Channel Hopping (TSCH) links.

    The 6TiSCH [I-D.ietf-6tisch-architecture] architecture requires the
    use of both RPL and the 6LoWPAN adaptation layer framework
    ([RFC4944], [RFC6282]) as defined over IEEE 802.14.5.
    6LoWPAN Neighbor Discovery [RFC6775] (ND)  is also required to
    exchange Compression Contexts,  form IPv6 addresses and register
    them for the purpose of Duplicate Address Detection, Address
    Resolution and Neighbor Unreachability detection over one
    TSCH link.
Nodes in a IEEE 802.15.4 TSCH network follow a communication
    schedule.  A network using the simple mode of operation uses a
    static schedule.

    This specification defines operational parameters and procedures
    for a minimal mode of operation to build a 6TiSCH  Network.
   The 802.15.4 TSCH mode, the 6LoWPAN framework, RPL [RFC6550],
    and its Objective Function 0 (OF0) [RFC6552], are used unmodified,
    but  parameters and particular operations of TSCH and RPL are
    specified  to guarantee interoperability between nodes in a 6TiSCH
    Network.
More advanced work is expected in the future to complement the
    Minimal Configuration with dynamic operations that can adapt the
    Schedule to the needs of the traffic in run time.


2.  Requirements Language

    The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
    "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this
    document are to be interpreted as described in RFC 2119 [RFC2119].


Cheers,

Pascal


-----Original Message-----
From: 6tisch [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Ralph Droms
Sent: vendredi 18 décembre 2015 17:24
To: 6tisch <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: [6tisch] Consensus call on Summary of proposed resolution for issue
40 V3

(Moving discussion of the Abstract in "RE: [6tisch] #40 (minimal): Ralph's INT
AREA review on minimal" to this thread.)


On Dec 18, 2015, at 9:13 AM 12/18/15, Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
<[email protected]> wrote:
Dear all;

In order to address Ralph's issues on the minimal draft, we proposed a
rewording of the abstract and the introduction.
This reopens  a 2-weeks period of last call for these particular sections, with
the text as below.
If you disagree with the text, please let us know before January 1st.

Cheers,

Pascal


-----Original Message-----
From: Ralph Droms (rdroms)
Sent: lundi 14 décembre 2015 19:35
To: Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <[email protected]>
Cc: [email protected]
Subject: Re: Summary of proposed resolution for issue 40 V3


On Dec 14, 2015, at 11:16 AM 12/14/15, Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
<[email protected]> wrote:
Hello Ralph:

If you’re OK with this round, we’ll open a one week call to the WG to check
consensus.
The proposed replacement for slotted aloha is subject to change again
in that phase J

Please let us know;
Assessing WG consensus is OK with me.

- Ralph

Pascal

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Abstract update:

BEFORE


--------------
Abstract

  This document describes the minimal set of rules to operate an IEEE
  802.15.4 Timeslotted Channel Hopping (TSCH) network.  This minimal
  mode of operation can be used during network bootstrap, as a fall-
  back mode of operation when no dynamic scheduling solution is
  available or functioning, or during early interoperability testing
  and development.

---------------
AFTER

---------------
Abstract

This document describes a minimal mode of operation for a 6TiSCH
Network, to provide IPv6 connectivity over a Non-Broadcast
Multi-Access (NBMA) mesh that is formed of IEEE 802.15.4 Timeslotted
Channel Hopping (TSCH) links.
This minimal mode uses a collection of protocols including the 6LoWPAN
framework and RPL to enable shared access operations over a static
TSCH schedule
I'll reiterate my suggestion to use a higher level description here in the 
abstract:

This minimal mode uses a collection of protocols including the 6LoWPAN
framework and RPL to enable interoperable IPv6 connectivity over
IEEE 802.15.4 TSCH with minimal network configuration and infrastructure.

-------------
-------------
-------------

Intro update:



BEFORE


--------------

1.  Requirements Language

  The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
  "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in
this
  document are to be interpreted as described in RFC 2119 [RFC2119].

2.  Introduction

  The nodes in a IEEE 802.15.4 TSCH network follow a communication
  schedule.  The entity (centralized or decentralized) responsible for
  building and maintaining that schedule has precise control over the
  trade-off between the network's latency, bandwidth, reliability and
  power consumption.  During early interoperability testing and
  development, however, simplicity is more important than efficiency.
  One goal of this document is to define the simplest set of rules for
  building a TSCH-compliant network, at the necessary price of lesser
  efficiency.  Yet, this minimal mode of operation MAY also be used
  during network bootstrap before any schedule is installed into the
  network so nodes can self-organize and the management and
  configuration information be distributed.  In addition, the minimal
  configuration MAY be used as a fall-back mode of operation, ensuring
  connectivity of nodes in case that dynamic scheduling mechanisms fail
  or are not available.  The IEEE 802.15.4 specification provides a
  mechanism whereby the details of slotframe length, timeslot timing,
  and channel hopping pattern are communicated when a node time
  synchronizes to the network [IEEE802154].  This document describes
  specific settings for these parameters.


---------------------------




AFTER

--------------


1.  Introduction

  A 6TiSCH Network provides IPv6 connectivity over a Non-Broadcast
  Multi-Access (NBMA) mesh that is formed of IEEE 802.15.4
  Timeslotted Channel Hopping (TSCH) links.

  The 6TiSCH [I-D.ietf-6tisch-architecture] architecture requires the
  use of both RPL and the 6LoWPAN adaptation layer framework
  ([RFC4944], [RFC6282]) as defined over IEEE 802.14.5.
  6LoWPAN Neighbor Discovery [RFC6775] (ND)  is also required to
  exchange Compression Contexts,  form IPv6 addresses and register
  them for the purpose of Duplicate Address Detection, Address
  Resolution and Neighbor Unreachability detection over one
  TSCH link.

  Nodes in a IEEE 802.15.4 TSCH network follow a communication
  schedule.  A network using the simple mode of operation uses a
  static schedule.

  This specification defines an operational parameters and procedures
s/an//

  for a minimal mode of operation to build a 6TiSCH  Network, using
  the Routing Protocol for LLNs (RPL) and a static TSCH Schedule.
Either delete ", using the Routing Protocol for LLNs (RPL) and a static TSCH
Schedule" or mention all the other protocols in use here, as well.

Do you want to mention the join process?  Security?

The 802.15.4 TSCH mode, the 6LoWPAN framework, RPL [RFC6550],
  and its Objective Function 0 (OF0) [RFC6552], are used unmodified,
  but  parameters and particular operations of TSCH and RPL are
  specified  to guarantee interoperability between nodes in a 6TiSCH
  Network.

  More advanced work is expected in the future to complement the
  Minimal Configuration with dynamic operations that can adapt the
  Schedule to the needs of the traffic in run time.


2.  Requirements Language

  The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
  "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in
this
  document are to be interpreted as described in RFC 2119 [RFC2119].

Pascal
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