Authors, I went through the changes between v14 and v15 on the bitbucket repo and agree with the changes made. Thomas
On Fri, Feb 26, 2016 at 11:22 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) < [email protected]> wrote: > Hello Xavi: > > > > I’m not asking for any change change but editorials. In particular I do > not see a need to say that minimal could be disabled. Anything can be > disabled, it’s always an admin decision to implement a protocol. The > important thing is that minimal does not preclude the use of other TSCH > traffic on other timeslots. > > > > As I reread the draft, I have some editorial suggestions, feel free to > pick or not: > > > > “bitmap in the active cell indicate that a node” -> indicates? > > “This results in ‘’Slotted Aloha’’ behavior” -> This results in a behavior > that is similar to that of ‘’Slotted Aloha’’. > > “acknowledgement” -> acknowledgment > > “neighbour” -> neighbor > > “EBs MUST NOT be used for time” -> EBs are not used for time > > “rank” -> Rank (when talking about RPL’s Rank) > > “Routing extension headers such as RPI and SRH and inner > > IP headers MUST be compressed according to [RFC6282], > > [I-D.ietf-6lo-routing-dispatch] and [I-D.ietf-6lo-paging-dispatch].” > > -> > > “ > > Routing extension headers such as RPI [RFC6550] and SRH [RFC6554], and > outer > > IP headers in case on encapsulation MUST be compressed according to > > [I-D.ietf-6lo-routing-dispatch] and [I-D.ietf-6lo-paging-dispatch]. > > “ > > > > Also: [I-D.ietf-6lo-routing-dispatch] and [I-D.ietf-6lo-paging-dispatch] > should be normative references. Should not delay minimal if we last call > soon. > > > > Take care, > > > > Pascal > > _______________________________________________ > 6tisch mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch > > -- _______________________________________ Thomas Watteyne, PhD Research Scientist & Innovator, Inria Sr Networking Design Eng, Linear Tech Founder & co-lead, UC Berkeley OpenWSN Co-chair, IETF 6TiSCH www.thomaswatteyne.com _______________________________________
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