Dear Ben, I am preparing answers for your comments. I will respond asap.
kind regards, Xavi 2017-02-16 4:08 GMT+01:00 Ben Campbell <[email protected]>: > Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-6tisch-minimal-20: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6tisch-minimal/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > - Substantive Comments > > -- Section 4, 2nd paragraph, "A node MAY use different values": Is that > intended to weaken the RECOMMENDED in the previous sentence? (If not, > then is the MAY needed at all?) > > -- 4.5.1, first 3 paragraphs: Why are the SHOULDs not MUSTs? Can you > articulate why it might be reasonable to make other choices? > > -- 4.5.2, 3rd paragraph, "It MAY be necessary..." > That seems like a statement of fact. Please consider non-2119 language. > > --- 4th paragraph: It's not clear to me if the MUST in "MUST be sent as > per the 802.15.4 specification..." is constraining options from that > specification, or just referring to requirements that exists in that > specification. If the latter, please consider descriptive rather than > normative language. (e.g. "The 802.15.4 specification requires...." > > -- 6.1, 3rd paragraph: Why is the SHOULD not a MUST? When might it make > sense not to follow those rules? > > > - Editorial Comments > > -- Abstract: Please expand 6TICH on first mention > > > -- Dr. Xavier Vilajosana Wireless Networks Lab *Internet Interdisciplinary Institute (IN3)Professor* (+34) 646 633 681 [email protected] <[email protected]> http://xvilajosana.org http://wine.rdi.uoc.edu Parc Mediterrani de la Tecnologia Av Carl Friedrich Gauss 5, B3 Building 08860 Castelldefels (Barcelona). Catalonia. Spain [image: Universitat Oberta de Catalunya]
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