Dear Georgios,

thanks so much for your detailed review. Let me answer inline.

The fixes will appear in a next version of the draft.

kind regards
Xavi

2018-04-09 11:26 GMT+02:00 Georgios Z. Papadopoulos <
[email protected]>:

> Hello Xavi and co-authors,
>
> Many thanks for such draft. It is indeed something that we were missing
> here.
> I found some time to go through, and below you will find my
> comments/questions:
>
>
> ——
> “It is well-known that the smaller the guard time, the smaller the
> tolerated drift between two nodes, and hence the more precise their
> synchronization.”
>
> GP: the last part of this sentence (“and hence the more precise their
> synchronization.") is not always true, isn’t it?
> It is true when you are having very frequent Keep Alive and EB
> transmissions, otherwise, the smaller the guard time, the higher the
> probability of desynchronization between the two devices.
>

XV: I would say now (fixing the traffic)

  “It is well-known that, for a given network traffic, the smaller the
guard time, the smaller the tolerated drift between two nodes, and hence
the more precise their synchronization.”



>

>

>

> ——
> “Optionally, periodic refresh messages can be issued by the 6TiSCH node to
> the node that acts as global time source, through a provided CoAP URI
> exposing the time service.”
>
> GP: I am wondering whether such periodic refresh message should be
> Optional or Default to cope with potential drifts.
>
>
XV: What if the network has an inherent mechanism that compensates the
drift and hence nodes are always perfectly synchronized?  I agree that this
may be an edge case and the normal case is that nodes poll periodically the
time source. Does it hurt however to have that mechanism as optional?



> ——
> "An optional gt_lease value in days indicating the mandatory refresh
> period MAY be present."
>
> GP: again, considering the potential drifts, do you think the refresh
> period should be Optional and not included by Default?
>
> XV: see above.

>
> ——
> “If this value is 0, a node does not refresh the global time information.”
>
> GP: any use-case where a node does not need to refresh?
>
> XV: see above.

>
> ——
> Some minor typos:
>
> "This time is relative to the moment the network started or reset and
> hence cannot be used to compare tagged events from different networks.”
> GP: "and hence" I would assume, it would need a comma : —> "and, hence,"
>

XV: fixed that.Thx!

>
> * “The global time reference is *a a* mapping between the ASN of the
> network and the global time at the moment of processing the Join Response..”
> GP: remove the extra “a”.
>
> XV: fixed that.Thx!

> * e.g., or e.g.
> GP: you may want to uniformalize it
>
> XV: fixed that.Thx!

> Best,
> Georgios
>
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