In addition to the comments from Tero, Pat Kinney provided a marked up review, which I have placed at http://www.sandelman.ca/SSW/ietf/6tisch/kinney-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-edits-2020.html
It arrived in some Apple proprietary format, having red-lines and
replacements, which after some grumpiness, I determined to some binary junk
followed by HTML.
The crux is that Pat prefers "transmit" to "send" and "receive" to "hears",
and I accept his wisdom about my use of vernacular language.
{I am now contemplating about writing an RFC in Belta Creole.
_Operational Considerations for Interstellar Wormholes_}
The changes from Pat are now at:
https://bitbucket.org/6tisch/6tisch-join-enhanced-beacon/commits/8b18e8ae818c80f09b9b598bde8504f8d566a0d7
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