> > — Section 1.2 — > > > The EB is used by nodes already part of a TSCH network to annouce > > its existence. > > > I can’t figure out the antecedent to “its”. Can you rephrase this > > sentence to make it clearer? > > It has been changed to "their", but that doesn't help you much. > I'm not exactly sure what to do here, so I'm asking the mailing list. > > The EB announces the existence of both: > - the nodes already joined > - the TSCH network
Ah, OK. Maybe this, then?: OLD The EB is used by nodes already part of a TSCH network to announce their existence. Receiving an EB allows a Joining Node (pledge) to learn about the network and synchronize to it. NEW An EB announces the existence of a TSCH network, and of the nodes already joined to that network. Receiving an EB allows a Joining Node (pledge) to learn about the network and synchronize to it. END > > You should also get rid of the “/s” later in the paragraph. > > I'm saying, "1 slot per second". I shall write that out? Ahhhh... I hadn't picked that up at all. Yes, the text in -11 works; thanks. And thanks for the other changes as well. Barry _______________________________________________ 6tisch mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch
