Thanks! > On 20. Feb 2020, at 20:08, Michael Richardson <[email protected]> wrote: > > > Mirja Kühlewind via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote: >> One question: How is the proxy priority supposed to be calculated/set? >> Is there a default value? > > draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority describes a way to calculate it when RPL > is used. The calculation needs to take into account available network > resources along the paths down to the Join Proxy, and also network-wide > "enthuasiam" for new nodes. > I will add a reference: these two documents started as a single document, but > seem to have never gained appropriate cross-links. > >> Editorial comment: I would recommend to repeat the abstract in the >> intro as, as stated in the RFC style guide RFC7322 section 4.3, "[...] >> an Abstract is not a substitute for an Introduction; the RFC should be >> self-contained as if there were no Abstract." > > yes, that's good, I'll move and merge some text. > >> Nit: sec 1.3: s/Although However/Although/ or s/Although >> However/However/ ? s/a unicast RS may be transmitted in >> response[RFC6775] reduces the amount of.../a unicast RS that may be >> transmitted in response [RFC6775] reduces the amount of.../ ? (Also >> note missing space before [) > > already edited, i hope you it will make more sense. > > -- > Michael Richardson <[email protected]>, Sandelman Software Works > -= IPv6 IoT consulting =- > > >
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