Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-12: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6tisch-msf/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for the work put into this document. Please find below some non-blocking COMMENTs and NITs. An answer will be appreciated. I hope that this helps to improve the document, Regards, -éric == COMMENTS == As Alissa's comment, please use RFC 8174 boiler plate. -- Section 3 -- Suggest to remove "The AutoRxCell MUST always remain scheduled after synchronized. * 6P CLEAR MUST NOT erase any autonomous cells." from the bulleted list and create a new paragraph for those 2 lines. -- Section 4 -- The whole section seems to assume that the events will work as expected. But, what if this is not the case? E.g., the JP does not send any reply ? -- Section 5.3 -- "we necessarily have NumTxAck <= NumTx" is only true is all nodes behave... "MUST be divided by 2", the example is about 127 divided by 2 giving the unexpected value (to me at least) of 64... The text should clarify how rounding is handled as it is not a plain right shift by 1. Step 2, is it also applicable to any value of MAX_NUMTX ? Including very small or very large ones ? == NITS == -- section 5.2 -- To be checked by a native speaker but s/can have a node switch parent/can have a node switching parent/ would make the text easier to parse. -- Section 14 -- Please order the rows of Figure 2. _______________________________________________ 6tisch mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch
