Thanks Erik for the review! I will fix those comments and publish a new version soon.
Tengfei Dr. Tengfei Chang Post-doctoral Researcher Wireless Networking for Evolving & Adaptive Applications (EVA) National Inst. for Research in Comp. Sci. and Automation ( Inria ) (+33)1 80 49 41 43 [email protected] www.tchang.org ____________________ ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Erik Kline via Datatracker" <[email protected]> > To: "iesg" <[email protected]> > Cc: "draft-ietf-6tisch-msf" <[email protected]>, "6tisch-chairs" > <[email protected]>, "6tisch" > <[email protected]>, "Pascal Thubert, pthubert" <[email protected]>, "Pascal > Thubert, pthubert" <[email protected]> > Sent: Saturday, September 12, 2020 7:45:52 AM > Subject: Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-17: (with COMMENT) > Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-17: Yes > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6tisch-msf/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > [[ nits ]] > > [ section 2 ] > > * "to do at each time slots" -> "to do at each time slot" > > * "there is a frame to sent" -> "there is a frame to be sent" > > [ section 4.3 ] > > * "the pledge continue listening" -> "the pledge continues listening" > > [ section 4.4 ] > > * "After selected a JP" -> > "After selecting a JP" or "After having selected a JP" > > [ section 4.8 ] > > * "AutRxCell" -> "AutoRxCell"? > > * "for new pledge" -> "for new pledges"? > > [ section 5.1 ] > > * "used to both type of" -> "used for both type of"? > > [ section 8 ] > > * "consequence of randomly cell selection" -> > "consequence of random cell selection"? > > [ section 9 ] > > * "define din" -> "defined in" > > [ section 16 ] > > * "considrations" -> "considerations" > > * "to hand that packet" -> "to handle that packet", maybe All accepted! _______________________________________________ 6tisch mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch
