Thank you Erik for your review - very much appreciated!

I have integrated your suggestions (plus some further general enhancements 
and optimizations) into another draft version that I will upload shortly.

May I solicit just one more bit of feedback from you?

In the 'Conventions' section, I have summarized the variables used throughout 
the howto; however there a few that I feel I have not accurately described, or
that they could use more idiomatic nomenclature - could you help out with the
following:


<authdomain>  - The authentication domain name used for the auth services your 
server will be supplying.

<machinekey>  - A secret key assigned to the machine.

<secstorekey>  - ???: summarize what the secstore key is.


I'm not satisfied with my descriptions for authdomain and machinekey, and I
simply was not even able to come up with a terse/succinct way of summarizing
the secstore key.


Many thanks!



On Monday 10 August 2009 22:34:00 erik quanstrom wrote:
> On Tue Aug 11 01:02:13 EDT 2009, [email protected] wrote:
> > I finished the first draft of a cpu/auth server
> > installation/configuration howto:
> >
> > http://www.p9dp.org/plan9-cpu-auth-server-howto.html
> >
> > It would be great if whoever's interested, and has a bit of time could
> > check it out, try it, and offer any suggestions/comments.
>
> step 3.
> you really don't want rwm on.  use dmaon script instead of doing
> it by hand.  also ip/ipconfig with no args is recommended if you already
> have a dhcp server.  also, this should be in your cpurc.local.
>
> step 5.
> these devices you suggest binding are already bound
> * #S  /lib/namespace
>
> it's probablly not a good idea to suggest that everyone bind
> these:
> * #m, #i
>
> since not everyone is interested in starting rio on their cpu server.
> likewise aux/vga, aux/mouse and rio don't belong in everyone's
> /cfg/$s/cpustart. (it's really difficult to use the serial console remotely
> if you've started rio!)
>
> step 8.
> don't invalidate the host keys after you've set them!  do that first.
> also set the hostowner's keys here.
>
> step 11.
> refreshing cs is not required for ndb/query to work.  ndb/query doesn't
> care what cs thinks.
>
> step 14.
> setting host key can be omitted.  you should have done that in step 8.
>
> step 17.
> it's a good idea to always leave a 9fat menu around on your auth server.
> if you screw a kernel up, you'll really be proud of your self for it!
>
> - erik


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