#13: Section 1.2 - language clarity
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Section 1.2
Old Text:
Some deployments are sometimes required to deploy complex technical
infrastructure, including message routing intermediaries, to offer
the required technical functionality, while in other deployments
those are missing.
New Text suggestion:
I think that the word sometimes should be removed - thus
Some deployments are required -- or
Deployments are sometimes required
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Reporter: ietf@… | Owner: draft-ietf-abfab-arch@…
Type: defect | Status: new
Priority: minor | Milestone:
Component: arch | Version:
Severity: - | Keywords:
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Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/abfab/trac/ticket/13>
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