On Sat, Dec 10, 2011 at 8:31 PM, abfab issue tracker
<[email protected]> wrote:
> #26: Section 2.5 - Setion contains a picture but no discriptive text
>
>  Descriptive text should be included to talk about figure 2 in some way.
>  Either that or this diagram is in the wrong place.  Like maybe it should
>  be at the very front and a discussion of the different parts in a glossary
>  form should be done.l

Also, the legend is wrong.  The end-to-end and hop-by-hop legends are swapped.

Nico
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