-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 On 12/13/2011 06:43 PM, Jim Schaad wrote: > I have no objection to closing this issue. > > I would look at one small change which is not core - > > Current Text: These aspects are generally managed within a > relationship known as a 'federation'. > > Suggestions: I think that the work 'generally' should be removed. > For the purposes of this document they will be managed in a > federation. If they are not managed in that way they are out of > scope of this document. Either that or the start of the next > sentence should be "When done in this manner, this style of..."
I'm fine with this change. -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.11 (GNU/Linux) Comment: Using GnuPG with Mozilla - http://enigmail.mozdev.org/ iEYEARECAAYFAk7oYHMACgkQ8Jx8FtbMZnfC2ACdEjiriRt6AHM11vIoFcqRLOCU gxIAnRt9GKJBw7dNMVj0Daw+dAHEKd8o =efr0 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- _______________________________________________ abfab mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/abfab
