Hi all,
I'm just a visitor to abfab at the moment, but I ended up with this draft
open in my browser after listening to today's session.
It generally seems reasonable, but I had a few editorial notes:
In the last paragraph of 6.3.1, there's a typo in "a secure a manner as
possible" -- the first 'a' should be "as". The last sentence of that
paragraph is also a little unclear, as to what the 'this' is which may be
not done properly.
In the second paragraph of section 7, "manipulate it and control" should
have an "it" after "control" (the "it" after "manipulate" could optionally
be removed).
-Ben
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