Here is the typo. Sorry... > I bit of sentence that ask careful setup would be helpful since this document > is intended to be a guideline for the impelemnters.
A bit of sentences that ask careful setup would be helpful since this document is intended to be a guideline for the implementers. Take > -----Original Message----- > From: abfab [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Takeshi Takahashi > Sent: Thursday, August 7, 2014 11:32 AM > To: [email protected] > Subject: [abfab] on the draft-ietf-abfab-usability-ui-considerations-01 > > Hello Rhys, > > I was reading the draft draft-ietf-abfab-usability-ui-considerations-01. > It was an interesting document that provides assorted consideration on the > user interface. > Here are some minor comments and questions. > > Comment 1: > In Section "5.1 Identity", you mentioned the possible confusion of the terms > for NAI. > It could be also true that some webpage use the term "username" in English > while the other uses the translated term in Japanese (or any other language). > > Comment 2: > In section "6.3.2 Manually Triggered Automated Addition", you have a > paragraph "One approach to accomplishing this . into the identity selector". > That is convenient, but careful setup of the website is needed. > A malicious person may wish to get the piece of data of the others. > The malicious person could be an internal personnel who has right to access > the webpage. > I bit of sentence that ask careful setup would be helpful since this document > is intended to be a guideline for the impelemnters. > > Comment 3: > In section "7.3 Listing Services and Identities", the section tiltle could > be "7.3 Listing Services" since current text talks about the listing > services, but does not talk about listing identities, I guess. > > Comment 4: > It could be outside the scope of this draft, but is it better for us to > talk about multiple use of a single identity at the same time? > I mean, there are two active sessions with a single identity. It could be > that third party may be using your identity. (e.g., two simultaneous login > to a signle webmail account) Some alert needs to be shown to the user? > > Comment 5: > In the terminology, you have defined the term "identity", but you also say > that the definition is a bit different from the ordinary sense and the word > "identifier" may fit better. > Can you tell me why you dared to define the term "identity" rather than > "identifier" then? > > Trivial comment: > It would be helpful if you could spell out acronyms and abbreviations when > they appear at the first time, such as HCI. > > Thank you. > > Take > > > > > _______________________________________________ > abfab mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/abfab _______________________________________________ abfab mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/abfab
