Not ready to ship.
* I find the text for NumericDate confusing and would suggest this is a cleaner wording. The "NumericDate" term has the same meaning, syntax and Processing rules as the "NumericDate" term defined in Section 2 of JWT [RFC7519], except that the CBOR numeric representation (Section 2.4.1 of [RC7049]) is used. The encoding is modified so that the leading tag (6.1 or 0xC1) MUST be omitted. <Note above text kills the direct need for section 5.> * What is a "CWT NumericDate" ? Why is this not just a "NumericDate"? You should be consistent on how you are using this and the "StringOrURI" type identifier. Either use the CWT prefix or don't. * s/except that a CWT StringOrURI/except that for a CWT, StringOrURI/ * The algorithm for doing nesting detection is a gross abuse of the content type parameter and can be far more easily done based on the already present tagging of the COSE object. * Break section 8 into multiple paragraphs that deal with different types of issues. * In section 8, the first sentence implies to me that you believe that COSE is more of a problem that breaking of cryptographic algorithms, trust of certificates/keys. Not sure what needs to be done, but better clarity may be a good idea. * I have not done any validation of the examples. You might want to have an example which uses the real for one of the time types. Jim -----Original Message----- From: Ace [mailto:ace-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Kepeng Li Sent: Thursday, April 20, 2017 2:53 PM To: ace@ietf.org Cc: Hannes Tschofenig <hannes.tschofe...@gmx.net> Subject: [Ace] [ace] WGLC on draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token In Chicago, it was decided that we were going to WGLC the ACE CBOR Web Token draft. So this starts a working group last call for draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token for submission as a Standards Track RFC, ending on 24:00 PDT on Tuesday, May 2, 2017. The specification is available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-04 An HTML-formatted version is also available at: http://self-issued.info/docs/draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-04.html Thanks, Kind Regards Kepeng & Hannes _______________________________________________ Ace mailing list Ace@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace _______________________________________________ Ace mailing list Ace@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace
