Hi Mike!

Thanks for publishing -04.  The changes made in this version address the last 
of my WGLC comments per [Danyliw #7] and  [Danyliw #12].  More details below:

> From: Mike Jones [mailto:michael.jo...@microsoft.com] 
> Sent: Tuesday, November 6, 2018 3:43 AM
> To: Roman Danyliw <r...@cert.org>; ace@ietf.org
> Cc: Jim Schaad <i...@augustcellars.com>
> Subject: RE: Summarizing WGLC discussion of 
> draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession
>
> Thanks for the useful summary, Roman.  Replies are inline below 
> prefixed by "Mike>".  I've just published draft -04, which contains the 
> small number of changes described below.  I believe that this completes 
> resolution of the WGLC feedback.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ace <ace-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Roman Danyliw
> Sent: Friday, July 13, 2018 12:56 AM
> To: ace@ietf.org
> Subject: [Ace] Summarizing WGLC discussion of 
> draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession

[snip]

>  [Schaad #16] Section 4 - Are audience restrictions not done in CWT?  -- same 
> issues as [Danyliw #12]
>
> Mike> All claims in CWTs (and JWTs) are optional, including the "aud" 
> (audience) 
> claim.  Particular profiles can suggest and require particular claims, as 
> this 
> profile does.  I have deleted the unnecessary middle sentence, which 
> [Danyliw #12] correctly pointed out broke up the logical flow of the 
> exposition. 
> Thanks for pointing this out.

This change addresses my concerns.

[snip]

> [Danyliw #7] Page 6, Section 3.3, The sentence "The COSE_Key could, for 
> instance, be encrypted using a COSE_Encrypt0 representation using the 
> AES-CCM-16-64-128 algorithm" seems out of place.  What is this text 
> explaining relative to the examples?
>
> Mike> Thanks.  I deleted the confusing and unnecessary sentence.

This change addresses my concern.

Roman

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