Hello Murray, Thank you for your review. The issues you pointed out have been fixed in -14.
/Ludwig > -----Original Message----- > From: Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <[email protected]> > Sent: den 25 mars 2021 04:57 > To: The IESG <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace- > oauth-params-13: (with COMMENT) > > Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Seems pretty straightforward to me, though I reserve the right to change > that opinion as I make my way through the other ACE documents. > > I realize ACE isn't responsible for CBOR notation, but I have to double-take > every time I see something that looks like JSON yet has stuff like a mix of > quotes and apostrophes as string delimiters of some kind. > > Section 3.2: "of from" should be "or from", in the 'cnf" definition block. > > Section 4: I think there's a parenthesis missing on the first line of the > example. > > _______________________________________________ Ace mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace
