Hello Murray, Thank you for reviewing this draft, sorry for the long waiting time.
Version -39 fixes your comment. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-39 Regards, Ludwig > -----Original Message----- > From: Ace <ace-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Murray Kucherawy via > Datatracker > Sent: den 25 mars 2021 08:45 > To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org> > Cc: ace-cha...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ace-oauth-au...@ietf.org; ace@ietf.org > Subject: [EXTERNAL] [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf- > ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT) > > Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > I share Eric V's concern about the apparently stale nature of the shepherd > writeup. It seems to be a common oversight lately. > > I also agree with Eric about Section 3. Nicely done. > > Since I'm getting to this document last in our queue this week, I find I have > little to contribute here that my colleagues didn't already include in their > positions, save this one gem: > > Section 8.2 should probably say explicitly that the registration should refer > to > this document, since that is a column of the registry to which you are adding > an entry. > > > > _______________________________________________ > Ace mailing list > Ace@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace _______________________________________________ Ace mailing list Ace@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace
