Hi Hendrik Sure, I will do that as part of my next draft. Thanks Mohit
On Thu, Apr 22, 2021 at 11:30 PM Brockhaus, Hendrik < [email protected]> wrote: > Hi Mohit > > Thank you for the update and removing specific reference to CMPV2. > May be you can also remove 'V2' in the document tittle, heading line, and > file name with the next update as well. > > Many Thanks, > Hendrik > > > Von: Ace <[email protected]> Im Auftrag von Mohit Sahni > > Gesendet: Freitag, 23. April 2021 07:54 > > > > Hello Ace WG, > > I have updated this draft based on the comments that I received from the > ACE > > WG. Here is a summary of the changes: > > - Changed CMPv2 to CMP and added reference to CMPv3 draft. > > - Updated the Service Discovery section based on the comments > > - Added more clarifications for coaps or coap over DTLS > > - Updated the CoAP-to-HTTP proxy section with more clarifications. > > - Updated the security considerations section based on David and > Hendrik's > > comments. > > - Few other minor changes. > > > > I believe I have taken care of all the comments that I got. > > > > Thanks, > > Mohit Sahni > > > > On Thu, Apr 22, 2021 at 10:37 PM <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > > > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > > This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for > > Constrained Environments WG of the IETF. > > > > > > Title : CoAP Transport for CMPV2 > > > Authors : Mohit Sahni > > > Saurabh Tripathi > > > Filename : draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-01.txt > > > Pages : 8 > > > Date : 2021-04-22 > > > > > > Abstract: > > > This document specifies the use of Constrained Application Protocol > > > (CoAP) as a transport medium for the Certificate Management Protocol > > > (CMP). 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