Thanks Marco! Yours, Daniel
On Thu, Dec 23, 2021 at 8:05 AM Marco Tiloca <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello Daniel, > > I do not have and I am not aware of any IPR on this document. > > I have just submitted version -15, with the two requested fixes. > > > * In Section 3.3 > > OLD: > the KDC MAY NOT include 'sign_info' parameter > > NEW: > the KDC MAY omit the 'sign_info' parameter > > > * The apparently unused reference "I-D.ietf-cose-rfc8152bis-struct" was > actually used in Section 1.1. However, it was spread over two lines, hence > probably missed by the nit checker. It's fixed now. > > > Best, > /Marco > > On 2021-12-23 01:55, Daniel Migault wrote: > > Hi, > > In order to complete the shepherd I would like the co-author to confirm > that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance > with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. > > Please have also a look at the nits > > https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-14.txt > <https://eur05.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww6.ietf.org%2Ftools%2Fidnits%3Furl%3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Farchive%2Fid%2Fdraft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-14.txt&data=04%7C01%7Cmarco.tiloca%40ri.se%7C7370a0447e6940f4515a08d9c5aef774%7C5a9809cf0bcb413a838a09ecc40cc9e8%7C0%7C0%7C637758178729531544%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C2000&sdata=9MzRKSbpg3bMwDcX6a3jjnn88H1d9j8rWVmGpX5VOQ4%3D&reserved=0> > > There is a MAY NOT that causes an issue as well as unused references. > > Yours, > Daniel > > On Mon, Oct 25, 2021 at 12:48 PM Marco Tiloca <marco.tiloca= > [email protected]> wrote: > >> Hello ACE, >> >> This new version should have addressed all the WGLC comments from Göran >> [1] and Cigdem [2], as well as further points from follow-up discussions >> on the thread throughout the draft revision. >> >> Thank you very much for the good comments! >> >> Best, >> /Marco >> >> [1] >> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/pr2gBhvqy9j8AfUdQVTZLwamXac/ >> <https://eur05.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fmailarchive.ietf.org%2Farch%2Fmsg%2Face%2Fpr2gBhvqy9j8AfUdQVTZLwamXac%2F&data=04%7C01%7Cmarco.tiloca%40ri.se%7C7370a0447e6940f4515a08d9c5aef774%7C5a9809cf0bcb413a838a09ecc40cc9e8%7C0%7C0%7C637758178729687782%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C2000&sdata=TGGln2GwsahjKNoqmEnJfGCvlIyHkD2l7gzVoDxSqjc%3D&reserved=0> >> >> [2] >> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/gv_uRo2Y45jqOLJghVSbAARWky0/ >> <https://eur05.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fmailarchive.ietf.org%2Farch%2Fmsg%2Face%2Fgv_uRo2Y45jqOLJghVSbAARWky0%2F&data=04%7C01%7Cmarco.tiloca%40ri.se%7C7370a0447e6940f4515a08d9c5aef774%7C5a9809cf0bcb413a838a09ecc40cc9e8%7C0%7C0%7C637758178729687782%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C2000&sdata=ieY4jgh2uJM1%2FlfupW0w6b2WScTlLuKcr1zVqMMGjF8%3D&reserved=0> >> >> On 2021-10-25 15:57, [email protected] wrote: >> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >> directories. >> > This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for >> Constrained Environments WG of the IETF. >> > >> > Title : Key Provisioning for Group Communication >> using ACE >> > Authors : Francesca Palombini >> > Marco Tiloca >> > Filename : draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-14.txt >> > Pages : 106 >> > Date : 2021-10-25 >> > >> > Abstract: >> > This document defines how to use the Authentication and >> Authorization >> > for Constrained Environments (ACE) framework to distribute keying >> > material and configuration parameters for secure group >> communication. >> > Candidate group members acting as Clients and authorized to join a >> > group can do so by interacting with a Key Distribution Center (KDC) >> > acting as Resource Server, from which they obtain the keying >> material >> > to communicate with other group members. 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