Hi Daniel, On 2022-09-16, Daniel Migault <[email protected]> wrote:
> Please find the shepherd write-up. Feel free to provide any comments before > we move the > document forward. > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize/shepherdwriteup/ In Section 2, please replace the reference to I-D.ietf-ace-dtls-authorize with a reference to RFC 9202. In Section 3, s/We do ghave/We do have/ In Section 6, I think the word "not" is missing? > On Fri, Sep 16, 2022 at 12:05 PM Daniel Migault <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Olaf, > > There two nits to address before the draft can be moved forward . > > ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC9202]), which it > shouldn't. Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the > documents in question. > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 6347 (Obsoleted by RFC 9147) Grüße Olaf _______________________________________________ Ace mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace
