Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-tnauthlist-08: Discuss
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-tnauthlist/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- DISCUSS: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for the work put into this document. Please find below one blocking DISCUSS point (but trivial to fix), some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be appreciated even if only for my own education). Special thanks to Rich Salz for the shepherd's write-up about the WG consensus (and I noted the mix of STIR & ACME). I hope that this helps to improve the document, Regards, -éric == DISCUSS == A very trivial one: please use the more recent BCP14 template (incl. RFC 8174) ;-) ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- == COMMENTS == Feel free to ignore but a small ASCII ART / SVG describing the interactions between all components would help the reader to understand the whole process. -- Section 3 -- Is "TN" a well-known acronym ? Please expand it at first use (even if I guess that "TN" stands for telephone number). -- Section 5.4 -- s/which shall be 'SHA256'/which MUST be 'SHA256'/ ? -- Section 5.7 -- Please expand "SPC", "OCN" on first use. As "SPID" is in https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt, its expansion is not mandatory but would be welcome. -- Section 6 -- In "then the CA MUST set the challenge object "status" to "valid"", isn't it up to the ACME server to do this action ? _______________________________________________ Acme mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/acme
