Dear Authors (cc: acme WG), Before the IETF meeting, we check working group agendas for documents with IANA-related issues. We have notes about this document:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-acme-device-attest-07 Section 7.1: The title of Section 7.1 refers to Identifier Types, but the text of the section asks for Validation Methods. (The latter seems to be an error, as Section 7.2 consistently refers to Validation Methods.) Section 7.2: The ACME Validation Methods registry also has a field called “ACME”: https://www.iana.org/assignments/acme Section 7.4: 1) The last sentence of Section 7.4 refers to “the registry established by [RFC8809],” but that document actually established two registries in the WebAuthn group. 2) It's possible that the IESG will question the statement in Section 7.4 that "Any additional processes established by the expert(s) after the publication of this document will be recorded on the registry web page at the discretion of the expert(s)." It might be appropriate to describe the type of process that's meant here (e.g., additions to the registration request submission methods described later in the section. Can the expert change details specified by the RFC?). 3) Section 7.4.1.1 establishes a URL for a new registry group, but it should also supply the name. Is it the name of the new registry, or should it use a broader name, like “Web Authentication (WebAuthn) for Certificate Request Protocols”? If you have any questions, just let us know. If you'd like to talk in person, you can find us next to the RFC Editor's table from Monday through Thursday. You can also request another review at any time by contacting us at [email protected]. For more information about IANA Considerations section requirements, please see https://www.iana.org/help/protocol-registration Best regards, Amanda Baber IANA _______________________________________________ Acme mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
