I pretty much have to agree with the other comments. What is the mission statement for the piece?
While I liked the use of music, etc. ou need to watch your lighting. I would have hoped that you would have used softer/more diffused ligthing which would have given better focus on the characters and avoid the shadows which were distracting. Title sequences and music were well done. --- In [email protected], "Marcelo Lewin" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi all, > I'm new to this group. I wanted to introduce myself. I'm a complete > beginner with in Adobe Premiere. I'm migrating from Vegas 5. I shot a > short flick and I'm looking for feedback on the editing techniques and > overall any other comments you may have. I hope this is ok to post here in > the group. It's called Patient 8794. It's 8 minutes long. It's about a > guy and his troubles with his HMO. > > You can check it out here: http://patient8794.thedailyfarce.com/ > > I'm looking forward to your feedback and to learning as much as possible > from all of you re: Premiere. > > My next short will be edited in Premiere Pro, so I can't wait to learn more! > > Cheers! > - Marcelo > > > ================================================ > > The Daily Farce News > A satirical and distorted look at the news > http://www.thedailyfarce.com/ > > TDF Films > Low Budget Independent Films > http://movies.thedailyfarce.com/ > > Level 2 Labs Media Services > Web - Photo Montages - SFX - Animation > http://www.level2labs.com/ > > ================================================ > > > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed] Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Adobe-Premiere/ <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: [EMAIL PROTECTED] <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
