Hi Michael,
Thanks for your feedback. Yeah, I've been trying to think how I can
shorten it a bit more, but to be honest with you, I want to make another
short. I've been working on this one on and off for the last 8 months.
Time to move on to another.
What do you do with video?
- Marcelo
P.S. BTW...I like to sit on my fat ass too. It's very "comforting". ;-)
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From: Michael Snell [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
Sent: Friday, January 14, 2005 10:43 AM
To: [email protected]
Subject: RE: [AP] My short flick...
I thought it was well done. My constructive comments would be for you to
take a look at how you could tighten it up; get rid of superfluous
material to make it shorter, stick to what is absolutely needed to tell
the story.
We are impatient people these days; I am surprised how often Saturday
Night Live gets away with beating a joke to death,
Number two do some thinking about who your target really is.
I think this is important because if the audience's attention is
directed to what I think is the wrong target, HMO's rather than the
medical/health profession; your message is less clear.
Without getting into the politics of it all, this situation to my mind
could happen in any country HMO or not.
When you focus on the health industry rather than HMO's you also broaden
the scope and make it less USA centric...anyhow thanks for sharing..it
inspires me to do a bit more than sit on my fat ass...
Mike S
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> Hi all,
> I'm new to this group. I wanted to introduce myself. I'm a
complete
> beginner with in Adobe Premiere. I'm migrating from Vegas 5. I shot
a
> short flick and I'm looking for feedback on the editing techniques and
> overall any other comments you may have. I hope this is ok to post
here
> in
> the group. It's called Patient 8794. It's 8 minutes long. It's
about a
> guy and his troubles with his HMO.
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> You can check it out here: http://patient8794.thedailyfarce.com/
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> I'm looking forward to your feedback and to learning as much as
possible
> from all of you re: Premiere.
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> My next short will be edited in Premiere Pro, so I can't wait to learn
> more!
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> Cheers!
> - Marcelo
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