Hi Marcelo,
 
Nice video..  I like the music selection and use.  Your host did well, and the 
subject matter seemed to be covered well. I agree with what Sune said, and 
might add that the lighting could have been better, or you could have 'exposed' 
it more while shooting.  Did you white balance?  Its looks a little yellow?  
I've done that, (filmed without white balancing indoors) and ended up havind to 
color correct in premiere, which worked out fine, btw.

I liked it though, and sat thru it without paying attention to the time or 
anything else.. your special effect use was good and not too much..
 

Sune <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Hi Marcelo!
I've put together a "good and bad" list. This is all "IMHO" though (in my 
humble opinion for all you non-geeks out there:)

Good:
- I like your pace. It's a good thing that you are constantly pushing 
forward through what you want to show. - You are successfully using music in 
the way that it puts "action" into your scenes. I especially enjoyed the 
dude "strutting" all the way to the server room. You made him look cool.
- Good casting! The subject seemed relaxed and natural in front of the 
camera.

Bad
- Get a proper mic:) I've learned it the hard way!! There's a large gap 
between the good audio in your music and the bad quality on your mic-audio.
- Be careful with your effects. I have to say your rolling of clips sideways 
at the start of the video was very out of place.

All in all I must say that it was an enjoyable video! Keep up the good work 
and let the list know when you have more for us to see if you'd like 
feedback!

-
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Sent: Wednesday, May 18, 2005 7:46 PM
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> Here is a short video I put together for my company where I work. We
> are promoting our employees in IT using this video. I shot it and edit
> it. It's my first video on Premiere Pro 1.5. Any comments (good and
> bad), would be greatly appreciate it.
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> It's all Premiere Pro only, with the exception of the intro title (Shea
> IT: Behind The Scenes). That was done in After Effects.
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> http://www.digitaldotsmedia.com/media/episode1.wmv
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> Thanks!
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> Marcelo Lewin
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