Tom Keiser <[email protected]> writes: > I'm happy with the draft in its current form. I do have a few very > minor typographic nits:
> 1) section 4: I think the "not" should be capitalized in, "They MUST > not remove leading components to search for more general DNS SRV RRs." > 2) section 5: It's probably quite obvious, despite being implicit, but > I'd feel better if the bullet point, "The server provides these > services over UDP" explicitly stated "Rx over UDP". > 3) section 5: "<tt> is its TTL" should read "<ttl> is its TTL" Thank you! All of these fixed in my copy, and I'll submit a new draft with those fixes before asking for the document to be advanced. -- Russ Allbery ([email protected]) <http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/> _______________________________________________ AFS3-standardization mailing list [email protected] http://michigan-openafs-lists.central.org/mailman/listinfo/afs3-standardization
