--On Wednesday, February 02, 2011 04:18:23 PM -0600 David Boyes <[email protected]> wrote:

12: what you're describing in this document is your proposed
implementation, not the actual code, right? If so, then the text of line
12 should reflect that it is a proposal, not a description of an
implementation.

Um, no. This is not a finished document that describes a proposal; it is a draft of a document that, when complete and assuming it is accepted, will be a standard. The abstract is not an abstract of the draft document and its present state; it is a draft of the abstract of the final document. What it says now -- "this document describes an ... RPC..." -- is entirely appropriate. Nowhere does it claim to describe an implementation, or even a proposed implementation. It describes a protocol.
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