On Tue, Jan 10, 2012 at 5:58 AM, Simon Wilkinson <[email protected]> wrote:
> I have updated the core rxgk draft to incorporate all of the previous > comments and corrections. The new version is available from > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-wilkinson-afs3-rxgk-02 > I have read the document and have no objections to the contents. However, I do have some suggestions: 1- Should RFC 2744 be added to the references, specifically to provide a source for various gss_* functions (e.g., gss_get_mic)? I also found the usage of both gss_get_mic and get_mic within this document to be a bit confusing, and that usage should either be made consistent, or perhaps an explanation given to the reader to explain why both are used in the document. 2- An edit might be done to capitalize all 'Requirements language' elements. (e.g., 'should' is inconsistently capitalized) Thank you, Steven
