Hi. See inline below... On Mon, Feb 20, 2012 at 07:38:00PM +0000, Simon Wilkinson wrote: > > On 17 Feb 2012, at 18:50, Dave Botsch wrote: > > > Just started reading this over. > > > > First thing that jumped out of me, in section 5. "Token Format" > > > > grammar: "specific to an particular application" ... an should be a\ > > I'll fix this. >
Great. > > > > the statement: the client, which just transmits it from server > > to server > > > > is kind of funky in its wording. I'm guessing this means the client > > receives the token from one server and transmits said token to another. > > That's exactly what it means - having received a token from the key > negotiation service, the client just passes that token, untouched, to the > application server. So, I would request this be reworded just to be clearer on what is happening. -- ******************************** David William Botsch Programmer/Analyst CNF Computing [email protected] ******************************** _______________________________________________ AFS3-standardization mailing list [email protected] http://lists.openafs.org/mailman/listinfo/afs3-standardization
