Thank you Ben for reviving this. There is quite a lot here, so let's try to
break this down a bit.  I'm starting this as a new thread for just a review of
the updates shown in the attachment (afs3-rxgk-updates.txt).  The other issues
can be discussed on a separate email thread.

ec2362e Wordsmith

+1 looks good to me.

39a100e Use fewer pronouns

+1 looks good to me

(etc)

Best regards,
Mike

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