I submit the following proposal and destroy 1 paper to pend it.

Proposal: Readability cleanup
(AI = 3, please)

Amend Rule 2166 (Assets) by replacing this text:

      An asset is an entity defined as such by a (a) rule, (b)
      authorized regulation, (c) group of rules and/or authorized
      regulations (but if such regulations modify a preexisting asset
      class defined by a rule or another title of regulations, they must
      be authorized specifically to do so by their parent rule), or (d)
      contract (hereafter its backing document), and existing solely
      because its backing document defines its existence. An asset's
      backing document can specify when and how that asset is created,
      destroyed, and transferred.

with this text:

      An asset is an entity defined as such by its backing document, and
      existing solely because its backing document defines its
      existence. An asset's backing document can specify when and how
      that asset is created, destroyed, and transferred. A backing
      document must be one of:

        (a) A rule.

        (b) An authorized regulation.

        (c) A group of rules and/or authorized regulations. (If such
            regulations modify a pre-existing asset class defined by a
            rule or another title of regulations, then they must be
            specifically authorized to do so by those documents.)

        (d) A contract.

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