On 6/21/20 7:16 PM, Reuben Staley via agora-business wrote:
> I consent to the below contract (sorry Notary).
> 
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> Signature Enthusiast Allows Modification of Signature Through Rigorous
> Exchanging of Signature Suggestions
> 
> Players can join and leave this contract at any time.
> 
> Any party to this contract CAN submit a signature suggestion by paying 3
> coins to this contract and stating a short body of text no longer than
> 10 words.
> 
> Within the 4 days after a signature suggestion's submission, Trigon CAN
> and SHALL either approve or deny a signature suggestion by
> announcement. E SHALL NOT deny a suggestion unless the suggestion breaks
> one of the rejection criteria, which are enumerated at the end of this
> contract.
> 
> When Trigon approves a signature suggestion, e adds the suggestion to
> eir signature which is included at the end of all of eir messages, then
> e transfers 3 coins from this contract to emself.
> 
> When Trigon denies a signature suggestion, e transfers 3 coins from this
> contract to the player that submitted the signature suggestion.
> 
> Trigon is obligated to keep each suggestion in eir signature for a
> period of two weeks. After that period elapses, e may remove the
> suggestion at any time.
> 
> The rejection criteria are as follows:
> 
> 1. The suggestion includes swear words.
> 2. The suggestion includes serious, intentional insult to a person.
> 3. The suggestion treats real-world and/or in-game issues lightly.
> 4. The suggestion is otherwise in poor taste.
> 

You should probably include some safety against taking actions. Also,
you seem to be restricting the time period for the CAN, not just the SHALL.

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Champion, Badge of the Great Agoran Revival, Badge of the Salted Earth

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