Here's a new draft. Changes:

- Definition: A Victory Product is a Victory Card and/or Point. This
  simplifies some wording.

- Redo the fix. Now:

  - Products owned by the contract only go to the Trustee, but any
    player can cause that to happen.

  - Players can only withdraw from the Trustee emself (like before). To
    prevent the problems, there are now conditions: the contract
    doesn't own anything, and Cards are being withdrawn before Points.


I propose the following amendment, delimited by {...}, to the
Obstructive Pooling Contract (but not really because it's a draft).

{

At the end of this paragraph:

    Decipoints are a currency. A Victory Point is worth ten Decipoints
    and a Victory Card is worth 25 Decipoints.

add the sentence:

    A Victory Product is a Victory Card or a Victory Point.

Replace:

    The Trustee CAN transfer Victory Cards and Victory Points from this
    contract to emself by announcement.

with

    The Trustee CAN transfer Victory Products from this contract emself
    by announcement. Any party to this contract CAN act on behalf of
    the Trustee to transfer Victory Products Points from this contract
    to the Trustee.

Replace the following text:

    Any player (the withdrawer) CAN act on behalf of the Trustee to
    transfer Victory Cards and/or Victory Points to the withdrawer with
    value up to the withdrawer's Decipoints balance; when the withdrawer
    does this, that value in Decipoints in eir possession is destroyed.

with:

    To Withdraw is to act on behalf of the Trustee to transfer Victory
    Products to oneself. When a player Withdraws, the corresponding
    value in Decipoints is destroyed from the Withdrawer's possession.

    Any player CAN Withdraw Victory Products as long as all of the
    following are true:

    1. The contract owns no Victory Products.

    2. The Victory Products being withdrawn do not exceed the
       withdrawer's balance before the withdrawal.

    3. No Victory Points are being withdrawn, or the Trustee owns no
       Victory Cards, or the Withdrawer is withdrawing all of the
       Trustee's Victory Cards. (In other words: preference must be
       given to withdrawing Cards.)

}


-- 
Falsifian

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