Dear all, We have fixed the nits. If anyone sees any issues, please do let us know.
Thanks! Richard On Mon, Dec 9, 2013 at 2:30 AM, Enrico Marocco < [email protected]> wrote: > Thanks Richard, > > I understand the document is substantially ready to be sent to the IESG. > > While preparing the shepherd writeup, I've noticed the latest version of > the draft does not pass the I-D-nits tool check: > > http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-alto-protocol-22.txt > > The errors and warnings raised seem trivial; can we ask you a last > effort to fix them, so that the document leaves the WG in a clear state? > > Enrico > > On 12/4/13 9:52 PM, Y. Richard Yang wrote: > > Hi all, > > > > We made small edits to fix two typos and add clarification. The diff can > > be found at: > > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-protocol-22 > > > > Wendy has checked the changes and is fine with the changes. > > > > Thanks! > > > > Richard > > > > ---------- Forwarded message ---------- > > From: ** <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> > > Date: Wed, Dec 4, 2013 at 3:50 PM > > Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-protocol-22.txt > > To: [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > > Cc: [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > > > > > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > > directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization > > Working Group of the IETF. > > > > Title : ALTO Protocol > > Author(s) : Richard Alimi > > Reinaldo Penno > > Y. Richard Yang > > Filename : draft-ietf-alto-protocol-22.txt > > Pages : 87 > > Date : 2013-12-04 > > > > Abstract: > > Applications using the Internet already have access to some topology > > information of Internet Service Provider (ISP) networks. For > > example, views to Internet routing tables at looking glass servers > > are available and can be practically downloaded to many network > > application clients. What is missing is knowledge of the underlying > > network topologies from the point of view of ISPs. In other words, > > what an ISP prefers in terms of traffic optimization -- and a way to > > distribute it. > > > > The Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Service provides > > network information (e.g., basic network location structure and > > preferences of network paths) with the goal of modifying network > > resource consumption patterns while maintaining or improving > > application performance. The basic information of ALTO is based on > > abstract maps of a network. These maps provide a simplified view, > > yet enough information about a network for applications to > > effectively utilize them. Additional services are built on top of > > the maps. > > > > This document describes a protocol implementing the ALTO Service. > > Although the ALTO Service would primarily be provided by ISPs, other > > entities such as content service providers could also operate an ALTO > > Service. Applications that could use this service are those that > > have a choice to which end points to connect. Examples of such > > applications are peer-to-peer (P2P) and content delivery networks. > > > > > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-protocol > > > > There's also a htmlized version available at: > > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-protocol-22 > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-protocol-22 > > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org > > <http://tools.ietf.org>. > > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > _______________________________________________ > > alto mailing list > > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > > > > > > > > -- > > -- > > ===================================== > > | Y. Richard Yang <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> | > > | Professor of Computer Science | > > | http://www.cs.yale.edu/~yry/ | > > ===================================== > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > alto mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > > -- -- ===================================== | Y. Richard Yang <[email protected]> | | Professor of Computer Science | | http://www.cs.yale.edu/~yry/ | =====================================
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