Thank Lili, will fix these nits in the next version. -Qin -----邮件原件----- 发件人: alto [mailto:[email protected]] 代表 Lili Liu 发送时间: 2017年6月30日 6:31 收件人: [email protected] 主题: [alto] several views on "ALTO Performance Cost Metrics draft-ietf-alto-performance-metrics-01”
Hi everyone, I’ve been reading "ALTO Performance Cost Metrics draft-ietf-alto-performance-metrics-01” these days and have some comments as follows: This draft is written in good organization. The authors present a set of Cost Metrics which work for ALTO system, give them a detailed description and give some examples for them. But there’re still some grammar errors in the draft as follows: page1: para2 line 3: offers->offer para3 line 3: end to end-> end-to-end page4: para 3 line 2: policy->policies para 3 line 3: end to end->end-to-end para 3 line 4: ALTO may convey such information, not available via 3rd party measurement tools.->seems strange para 4 line 2: if they feel-> how could applications feel something? page5: para 1 to para 2: unnatural transition para 2 line 5: them->the para 4 line 4: on time periods covering the past and present-> based on both previous and current time page6: para 1 line 2: bandwidth related->bandwidth-related page16: para 2 line 2: neighbor->neighbors page24: pare1 line 1:Indeed, TE performance is a highly sensitive ISP information and sharing TE metric values in numerical mode requires full mutual confidence between the entities managing the ALTO Server and Client.-> Indeed, TE performance is a kind of highly sensitive ISP information. Therefore, sharing TE metric values in numerical mode requires full mutual confidence between the entities managing the ALTO Server and Client. Best, Lili _______________________________________________ alto mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto _______________________________________________ alto mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
