Hi Danny, Thanks for your review. I quickly go over your comments. Many of your comments are about the format issue. Authors will fix them soon.
Thanks, Jensen On Mon, Jul 9, 2018 at 1:24 AM Danny Alex Lachos Perez <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello Sabine and WG > > I reviewed Introduction, S1, S2, S3, and S4 of the Unified Property > draft. My comments are in the attached file (marked with [DANNY]). > > Ss > > Danny Lachos > > On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 3:11 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - > FR/Paris-Saclay) <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Hello, >> >> The main updates in this new version relate to the consistency procedure >> between ALTO Address Type Registry and >> ALTO Entity Domain Registry as discussed during the ALTO WG session in >> London. This is addressed in section 9. IANA Considerations, where 9.2 >> specifies the ALTO Entity Domain Registry and 9.2.1. proposes an algorithm >> to ensure consistency between both registries. >> >> Other updates include: >> - in section 1. Introduction: a paragraph introducing ALTO Entity domains, >> - In section 6.3, some rewording to clarify between "pid" and "PID" to >> avoid headaches, >> - section 7.3 example IRD: name update for the Endpoint property resource >> - section 7.4: example transaction >> - Section 10 References: updates and reformatting >> - usage of expression "ALTO Entity Domain" throughout the document >> >> Your feeback will be highly appreciated >> >> Thanks >> Sabine, Jensen, Dawn >> >> -----Original Message----- >> From: alto [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of >> [email protected] >> Sent: Friday, June 29, 2018 7:29 PM >> To: [email protected] >> Cc: [email protected] >> Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt >> >> >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >> directories. >> This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization >> WG of the IETF. >> >> Title : Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol >> Authors : Wendy Roome >> Shiwei Dawn Chen >> Sabine Randriamasy >> Y. Richard Yang >> Jingxuan Jensen Zhang >> Filename : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt >> Pages : 30 >> Date : 2018-06-29 >> >> Abstract: >> This document extends the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization >> (ALTO) Protocol [RFC7285] by generalizing the concept of "endpoint >> properties" to domains of other entities, and by presenting those >> properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in ALTO. >> >> >> >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/ >> >> There are also htmlized versions available at: >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04 >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04 >> >> A diff from the previous version is available at: >> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04 >> >> >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of >> submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at >> tools.ietf.org. >> >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >> >> _______________________________________________ >> alto mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >> >> _______________________________________________ >> alto mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >> > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >
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