Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-18: No Objection

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Thanks, Sabine, for addressing my comments!

There's just one minor thing still outstanding.  It's not a big deal, but the
RFC Editor will raise it and it will save time later if you deal with it now:

The terminology section makes a point of citing the significance of the
capitalization of "Client" and "Server", so it would be good to check the
document for consistent usage of the capitalized terms, as I see quite a number
of other such cases.  You did fix the one I called out specifically (in Section
3.1), but I still see a bunch of cases of "client" and "server" that are not
capitalized, and that I think should be.  Please do check and correct the
consistency.



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