Dear Qin, Kai, Thank you so much for checking. I have updated the document and addressed all missing comments. A new version is being uploaded now.
Thanks again! Richard On Tue, Jan 12, 2021 at 12:57 AM Qin Wu <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi, Richard: > > Thanks for the update on performance metrics draft in v-13, you missed the > review comments from Kai > > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/PQy-QNz6UfTI6GxOPWCzc0VkHRo/ > > Checking Kai’s comments, I found some of them have been addressed, some of > them not, e. g., > > 1.Page 15,Example 3 > > s/delay-var/delay-variation > > 2.Page 8 > > s/with letter p /with letter "p" > > 3 Page 6, sec 2.1 > > remove "and" before sla > > s/latency typically do /latency typically does > > For Jensen’s comments, I see one issue is newly introduced, i.e., the term > “metric value” and “metric’s value” > > Are used inconsistently, I suggest to change metric’s value into metric > value. > > I hope these comments can be addressed before being moved forward. > > > > -Qin > > *发件人:* alto [mailto:[email protected]] *代表 *Y. Richard Yang > *发送时间:* 2021年1月12日 13:36 > *收件人:* Kai Gao <[email protected]> > *抄送:* [email protected]; IETF ALTO <[email protected]> > *主题:* Re: [alto] Meeting Info for Jan 12, 2021 > > > > Hi all, > > > > I have to skip the meeting this morning. > > > > One quick update is on the first agenda item: an updated version of > performance metrics is just posted and we believe that it has addressed all > of the review comments by Danny and Jensen. > > > > Richard > > > > > > On Mon, Jan 11, 2021 at 10:36 AM <[email protected]> wrote: > > Dear all, > > > > This is a friendly reminder that we will have an ALTO weekly meeting at *9:00 > am US EST (3:00 pm CET, 10:00 pm Beijing Time) on Jan 12, 2021*. > > > > Agenda: > > > > - IETF 110: Working group drafts and individual drafts > > - NAI workshop > > > > If anyone wants to put other topics on the agenda, please let me know or > use the agenda bash in the beginning of the meeting. > > > > Bridge: https://yale.zoom.us/my/yryang > > > > Best, > > Kai > > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > > -- -- ===================================== | Y. Richard Yang <[email protected]> | | Professor of Computer Science | | http://www.cs.yale.edu/~yry/ | =====================================
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