Dear Sabine: Excellent. I will start to wrap up the post-chair review process next week on this and path-vector so they can be sent to IESG.
Have a nice weekend. On Fri, Apr 16, 2021, 2:05 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay) <sabine.randriam...@nokia-bell-labs.com> wrote: > Dear Vijay, > > A new version 17 of the "ALTO Extension: Entity Property Maps" has been > uploaded and hopefully addresses the pending review comments. > It can be found at the link below, by clicking on the number "16" on the > ALTO status pages. > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17 > Below is a digest of the updates and we look forward to having your > feedback. > A detailed "diff" can be sent if you wish. > > Best regards, > Sabine & co-authors > ========================= > updates in draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17 > ========================= > Previous V16 was submitted to address Vijay's review of v15 > This V17 addresses remaining issues on V15 review > > Main update is the addition of a substantial Section 11. Security > Considerations. > The other updates are as follows: > > - Defined terminology nomenclature used in 4.4. Entity Hierarchy and > Property Inheritance > --- related (small) edits in subsections > > - In Section 4.7 Defining Information Resource for Resource-Specific > Property Values > text was clarified and moved back from 4.6.1 to 4.7. Section 4.7.1 (of > V15) with examples was merged with 4.7 > > - Clarified text on defining information resources in sections 4.6 and > 4.7, as review reflects it was unclear > --- added example in 4.6.2 of entity domain types that do not have a > defining resource > --- Clarified text in related IANA sections 12.2.2 and 12.3 > > - Added normative "MUST" wherever needed > --- section 4.3. Resource-Specific Entity Property Value > --- 4.6.1. Defining Information Resource and its Media Type > --- sections 12.2.2 and 12.3 on item "Media type of defining information > resource" > - Replaced lower case "must" with other words where convenient > > - Rewording > --- Clarified sentence distinguishes domain name and domain type in 3.2.1 > --- Added introduction sentence in Section 4 Advanced Features... > - Typos and nits in sections 5.1.2, 8.6 > > - Added normative and informative references > > >-----Original Message----- > >From: alto <alto-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org > >Sent: Friday, April 16, 2021 8:54 PM > >To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org > >Cc: alto@ietf.org > >Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17.txt > > > > > >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > >This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization > WG of > >the IETF. > > > > Title : ALTO Extension: Entity Property Maps > > Authors : Wendy Roome > > Sabine Randriamasy > > Y. Richard Yang > > Jingxuan Jensen Zhang > > Kai Gao > > Filename : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17.txt > > Pages : 59 > > Date : 2021-04-16 > > > >Abstract: > > This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization > > (ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" > > as applied to endpoints as defined by IP addresses to endpoints > > defined by a wider set of objects. Further, these properties are > > presented as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base > > ALTO protocol. The protocol is extended in two major directions. > > First, from endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering > > a wider and extensible set of objects; second, from properties on > > specific endpoints to entire entity property maps. These extensions > > introduce additional features allowing entities and property values > > to be specific to a given information resource. This is made > > possible by a generic and flexible design of entity and property > > types. > > > > > >The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/ > > > >There are also htmlized versions available at: > >https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17 > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17 > > > >A diff from the previous version is available at: > >https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-17 > > > > > >Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > >until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > > >Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > >ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > > >_______________________________________________ > >alto mailing list > >alto@ietf.org > >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >
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